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I really like the art and animation in this. Everything is very smooth and the sounds are synced well. Story wise, I was a bit lost, but then I caught on. However, one thing I didn't like is toward the end, you started pausing at frames for too long. I think you were trying to add effect to them, but they seemed like they lasted too long. Maybe move the background slightly to make it seem like it didn't freeze, or just make them shorter pauses. Good job either way! I hope part 2 is on the way.
Author's Response:
Yeah... I wasn't exactly trying to add effect, I was planning on doing something for the end but I had a goal to finish the flash before the end of my "happy day." I wanted to fix it, but over the rest of the school year, I got too lazy on it and I had thought of many project to do during the summer.
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Let's see here, I must say, you synced up the audio nice for one. Second, the second bit of the flash was also very nicely drawn.
Random? You hit the nail on the head. But don't get me wrong for giving you 4 stars, I chuckled. Next time make it longer, even doing a few random scenes.
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Oh man, having played Poke'mon, I can honestly say that this completely rocked. The humor in it was priceless. The shop items were great, and the rock attack was genius. Best part? Trying to "GTFO" from the lvl 41 weedle.
I'd say the only way to improve would be to make the walking animation, like the treens from spot to spot a bit more of the same speed. Sometimes the guy walked fast, sometimes he crawled. Great flash bud, keep it up!
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Being in it myself from the near beginning, this was really fun to watch unfold as time went on. I am quite happy with the final result and hope more flash authors are willing to come up with ideas such as this. Yay!
Author's Response:
Admittedly the Red Line Thread was a great inspiration for this concept, we have now overtaken it for posts, we're officially bigger!
Heretik's idea was great, I contributed :)
The art Forum is suddenly growing, and getting the recognition it deserves!
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